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Not a bad game! (Lengthy review incoming!)

I love the art style, these characters are quite well-designed for a web game, and the personalities and backstories are well thought out, and may be reminiscent of people the reader may know from real life. I like the fact that you can gain more money if you have more of a certain stat, and that you can choose which stat is buffed slightly upon starting the game. The game is a bit of a grind, but the backstories that come with each love interest are pretty worth it. I like the character development as you grow closer to the love interests, where they begin to give you "snippets" of their lives and their struggles. I also like how in some of the CG's, you are actually helping them achieve their goals, such as helping Tauri pass an exam in her route. The ability to see fanarts for each of the characters in the "extras" menu is great, too! Unfortunately, I am most upset about the fact that there are no real "endings" for these characters, as each of them have one piece of dialogue when you max out their "friendship level" and confess your feelings to them.

There's just a few bugs here and there, with the most prominent one being one that pops up  every time you finish a class on a weekday. Additionally, when trying to confess to Tauri, she only has one piece of dialogue, which is simply that she "Doesn't know what to say" upon your confession. I've seen from there comments that there's only one piece of dialogue upon confessing to you love interest, with Sylvia having the most competent answer, and Lyrae having no text at all, unfortunately. I would have loved if there were actual endings of each love interest, where there would be a special "scenario" where your chosen love interest would reciprocate your feelings, and an exclusive CG of your love interest could be obtained when you finally confess to them. Additionally,  would have love if there was a "gallery" menu, where you could see the CG's or "Scenarios" of characters that you have obtained, like other Visual Novels do. Lastly, there are a few spelling/grammar errors, but they don't distract from the story at all.

All bugs and issues aside, I think this is a pretty top-notch visual novel that is playable on the web for free. The length is pretty good, although it can get a bit grindy at times. I would personally recommend this to any Visual Novel enthusiast, but I would caution them that there is no real "ending" to this. 

TL;DR - Great game with well-designed characters and backstories for a web visual novel, but is a bit buggy, with spelling mistakes and no real endings. A quality web game regardless.

Overall rating: 7.5/10, a solid game overall. Here's hoping for an update that will hopefully resolve these issues?

This game definitely could be pretty damn good if those bugs and errors were polished out. I doubt it will get an update though considering the last one was in 2021 and the developer clearly moved on to other projects. One can certainly hope though.

Also, if you click on the journal at home and click on the girl's icons you can see their story parts and replay the scenarios to see their CGs again. Obviously an actual gallery would be better for viewing but it basically does the same thing, gotta deal with text boxes though. :\.

Hey anyone know any more games like this? (Mobile)

See my lists

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i maxed out all my stats but nothing happens when I do anything, apparently I'm still a stranger. Cannot figure out how to advance storyline. Just like real life :(

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Welcome to the reality.

damn bro, to be honest, its true

An error occurred when i try to pick "Increase Diligence" or whatever it was, REALLY wanted to play and finish the game but that error kinda got in the way.

But since the game is actually pretty nice, I'm gonna give it 8/10, I'm gonna give the other 2 if the bug is fixed =]

when you get the error said ''ignore'' and now you can continue the storieline

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great game, love the art and storyline

just a few small bugs here and there but it doesn't really deduct from the game's fun

e.g. after picking diligence i think theres an error in line165 of the actions.rpy in game folder that is quite easy to fix, just replace harem = 0 with harem == 0 and i think it should be fixed

also stuff like variable names being wrong like lyrae_pts in line 772 of events

Great game. I like the visual art and dating simulation system. It's a bit buggy but clearly on a way to be really cool. Great job

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there is an error after class. I can continue but could you fix that thanks!!

i liked it a lot!! however, the game was decently buggy. i like the characters a lot and the art was really good :33 the biggest thing for me was that i couldnt confess to lyrae :c

overall 8/10 game!! this game was super nostalgic for me and i had a super good time playing it :DDD

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It is a great game to be honest, the only problem is the bugs like the characters or text is missing when  you chat or confess with them but it is expected the game just got released I surely hope that in the next update they will fix it. Try and playing the game I recommend it. Keep up the good work.

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There's like a bug owhen you confess to lyrae, there isn't any text whatsoever, is there like a fix?

Maxed out everything in 90 days

no shit dude, I maxed out stats around 50ish days, maxed out all girls at day 75, lmao

isnt one of the drawings in the extras displaying yuri from ddlc

Not everything is a horror

feisty, not fiesty

Day:103

???

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Does this game end? I'm really enjoying it but I have been playing for a while, is there ending, or does the game just keep going?

im confused with this game

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this won't take a dark turn like ddlc will it?

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no fag, not everything is horror games

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good...i don't wish to be sad anymore. i just wish to be happy.

Lol me too bro

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PLEASEEE 


Not the F-slur, what are you 10? it's 2021 now. You stuck in 2016 or what?? 

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you're seriously concerned with some random person saying fag on the internet, don't you have anything better to do, also faggot means other than slurs,  fag can be a slang for cigarrete, faggot can also mean meatball, or it can even mean a bundle of sticks, i bet you didn't even know that

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yea but the context it was in was basically you just insulting someone, and technically you can’t use any of those other meanings in that one sentence or it won’t make any sense 

I am aware its other meanings but its obvious the way ur using it. or maybe you just wanted 2 call that person a meatball. I don´t know and don´t care. So how bout you go eat shit <3

actually yes i was wanting call that person a meatball

fag

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Hey! Thanks for a wonderful game! I played it all night after work!! Reminded me of dear friend :)

None the less I love these characters and I love the story! I feel we all forget how small of a world it is.

Personally I more gravitated towards Tauri. Fell for a girl like her forever ago that I no longer know. It reminded me of some very happy memories. 

I also love how there isnt no endings! Allbeit I would have loved to have taken one of the girls home to grandma haha. But having no ending is great. It allows the "reader" to compose their own. 

I like to imagine the girls got back together and had an even stronger relationship. I picture the main character stepping aside and eventually fading out of their lives for a while then eventually getting hitched with one of them. 

Anywyas thank you! I hope to read more stories by you. 

Ps. I ADORRRRRE the art. 

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Does anyone know when can I get them to accept my gifts? One of the girls is at 24% but she doesnt accept my gifts yet :(

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After the second story event. :)

I got maxed stats and the three girl are also maxed. I confess to the three in duplicate saves and nothing's happening. What am I supposed to do?

I cannot enter my name, I’m not sure if this has anything to do with me being on mobile but it was very annoying as this game looks very well made

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Alright so, after getting to day 106 this game was fun. Not much story so story wise, somewhat weak.

I grinded and got every stats to max which was nice to look at, however might deter people. I got over 10000 coins at the end which was nice to look at. I finished all 3 paths for the girls, it was nice.

However a couple problems I'd like to point out. Lyrae doesn't have text when you speak with her, easy fix so no too big of a deal if you didn't spend hours on the game. Each confession is rather boring, only Sylvia seems better than the rest but isn't even that good. It's just one line of dialogue or nothing with Lyrae.

No endings, I personally would like a heartfelt ending for each girl and possibly a harem ending. Not just a single piece of text. You've also got the class glitches, that's a bit annoying, added extra time to me grinding. It was fun and I haven't played light novels many times so I might be biased. If it had more story I'd play more.

Either way I completely sucked the game dry out of it's contents and felt rather empty. Personally if someone plays the game I'd recommend only going for one girl and waiting for updates. Course even then still dry ending but a update will probably help. I had a good experience somewhat but not much at the end.

Thank you for making this game. I hope to enjoy a finished and much more fun to play game in the future! (P.S barely played firefly game, don't know how it works.)

Line 165 should be ```harem_pf1 == 0;``` not ```harem_ph1 = 0;```

Also, define LyraePts

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An exception randomly occurred. I chose the Delinquent thing then slept through class, so that might have something to do with it (judging by the fact that it crashed after I slept through class on Day 1). And it says that Line 165 in the script fucked up or something, if that helps.

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I maxed out Tauri's status bar is there a ending to the story?

Like a kissing scene or something? 

A really great game btw.

Im hoping for a ending for each Character please make one.

How do I import save data?

it like ddlc

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im pretty sure that's what its based on cuz the characters look similar 

same

rip offs

i call it inspiration

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eh true ig

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I suggest archiving the files so they're not too many.

I use Ren'Py for my vis novels too so I know.

Here is some code you can use:

init python:
    # Declare archive files
    build.archive("scripts", "all")
    build.archive("images", "all")
    build.archive("audio", "all")
    build.archive("others", "all")
    # Put script files into the scripts archive.
    build.classify("game/**.rpy", "scripts")
    build.classify("game/**.rpyc", "scripts")
    # Put images into the images archive.
    build.classify("game/**.jpg", "images")
    build.classify("game/**.png", "images")
    build.classify("game/**.webp", "images")
    # Put audio into the audio archive
    build.classify("game/**.mp3", "audio")
    build.classify("game/**.ogg", "audio")
    # Put other files into the others archive
    build.classify("game/**.ttf", "others")
    build.classify("game/**.txt", "others")
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its a good game and i like how you can travel freely but how can I progress into the game? Im on day 67 and  the girls bar are low whenever I check the note book.

From what I know, It's a "Relationship Status",  not "Relationship Bar".

A little late but you have to go to specific places, press the "hang out" option and then chat with them. (ex: go to park, press "hang out" and Lyrae should pop up on your screen!)

oi

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A good game to play with, but it has bugs after player sleeps and heads to school while selecting the "3" choices in class. Whoever is the programmer needs to fix this on the next version, ASAP.

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oof :/

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just press ignore

Whenever I play I always have a good time until day 2 beginning of class choice, it gives me a gray screen and some error text no matter what choice I pick. 

just press ignore

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when i confess to lyrae it just shows blank text

just press ignore 

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There is no "ignore" button in this situation. This isn't an "exception has occurred" type error. I'm pretty sure there's just nothing scripted for confessing to Lyrae. In fact, I don't think any endings were programmed. Sucks, because this game was pretty good but then it just cuts off there.

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its a great game but i dont really know how to get a ending im on day113 got all the girls freindship to max got all my stats at max and confessed to all of them and im not getting a ending

You got friendzoned and so will I XD

the events are few and far between and i would rather have more of them and closer together, plus the chat option often repeats stuff and it would be better to choose what you say and have an actual convorsation

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I played through the game and have gotten one ending so far, it's been a pretty good game from what I've played through, however two small complaints I have are that anytime I went to school and chose a choice it would always give me an error and I had to hit ignore (idk if this happens for everyone) and confessing was a little underwhelming since all she says is she loves you back and nothing else changes, It would be nice if you add a final scene for when you confess to them bcuz I think it would make it a lot better, ty for reading :D

also happens to me

just press ignore

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This game was pretty amazing, I really love everything about the game! The only thing I'm curious about is if the game has an ending to it.  When I had tried to confess to Tauri nothing happened even though I had everything maxed out. I even tried to confess to the other girls but still nothing had happen. So I'm just curious if when everything is maxed out that's the ending or not? Either way amazing game 5/5 stars!

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